Plastic Surgery Persuasive Speech Critique pt. 2

I think I did a lot better this time around than last time. Last time I was all out of sorts and disorganized. This time I made sure to have everything I need on the Prezi so I didn't have to worry about losing my place and being disorganized. If I could improve some things I would probably try to improve my voice and eye contact a little more. I didn't really talk very loud and my eye contact was better, but it could use some work. I looked at the audience occasionally, but my eyes were still semi-glued to the smart board. I could try to memorize my speech next time so I wouldn't have to look at the board as often. I have a small voice to begin with, so on video it sounds even smaller. I need to practice projection, instead of yelling because that would sound a tad bit crazy. Over time I think my voice and projection will get better. I just need to practice to get all my nerves out and when that happens, I think my voice will get better and louder. All in all, I think this speech was a whole lot better than my last one, but, as always, there are always things to improve with any speech.